The question remains |
This sentence is taken from the dissertation of a Korean student of Business Studies. In the previous paragraph the writer had summarised the remarkable growth of Korean GNP over the past 40 years:
| Original | Revisions |
|---|---|
| There is a question of how Korea has achieved the outstanding economic success over the decades with its scarcity of natural resources and advanced technologies. | The question remains of how Korea has achieved this outstanding economic success over the decades with its scarcity of natural resources and advanced technology. |
| The question remains: how has Korea achieved this outstanding economic success over the decades with its scarcity of natural resources and advanced technology? |
A quick discussion with the student showed that by "There is a question of ..." he wanted to signal that although other questions had been answered, this one had not. I suggested the expression "the question remains ...": a quick concordance showed the sorts of contexts in which the expression occurs:
1 es not. The great question remains the single currency. The German public doesn't want it, it 2 . But the central question remains the provision of proper amounts of convenient land for app 3 meetings. But the question remains: are there any political prisoners in Georgia? To answer i 4 1917. But the key question remains: is cheating acceptable in school exams? The answer: only 5 . But the crucial question remains. Can IT improve the basic skills of the children who curre 6 ing systems". The question remains whether these technologies will be of any use. Edward Feat 7 oard, the crucial question remains whether the new watchdog can actually deliver its promised 8 ssing person. The question remains why so many should slip through in the first place. For so 9 om the slump. The question remains, however, of whether recovery would have been faster had t 10 ome hope, but the question remains of why they are not more widespread. Perception is part of
In the light of such data, I suggested two revisions of the original, the first using an indirect question structure with "of", and the second the rather more informal direct question structure. The student chose the former.
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