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Abdul Ala al Mawdudi viewed that the desire to display one's good deeds itself proves that the person concerned does not truly believe in Allah. | 1) Abdul Ala al Mawdudi stated that the desire to display one's good deeds itself proves that the person concerned does not truly believe in Allah. |
2) Abdul Ala al Mawdudi expressed the view that the desire to display one's good deeds itself proves that the person concerned does not truly believe in Allah. | |
3) Abdul Ala al Mawdudi viewed the desire to display one's good deeds itself as proof that the person concerned does not truly believe in Allah. |
The problem here is a syntactic one: the verb view cannot take a that-clause as its complement. The revisions show 3 different ways around this difficulty:
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He viewed that anyone who performs an act in defiance of Allah's guidance is guilty of rebellion and hence undeserving of Allah's reward. |
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