Kibbitzer 38 | Starting from the Right Place |
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Results 1There were 115 reported cases from 121 reporting forms (6 cases were notified from two different health services). 2Seventy-seven reporting forms (63.6%) came from BCC and the rest from other health services (Table 2.1.4). 3All of those 6 cases notified from two different health service were reported from BCC. 4The others included MCC (3 cases), other hospitals (2 cases), and HSE (1 case). | Results 1Seventy-seven reporting forms came from BCC, and forty-four from other health services (Table 2.1.4). 2The forms related to 115 cases, six being reported both by BCC and another health service (MCC 3 cases, other hospitals 2 cases, and HSE 1 case). |
To assist discusion of these texts I have numbered the sentences 1-4 (red) in the original, and 1-2 (blue) in the revision.
When I first read this paragraph I was not sure exactly what it meant. A way into the problem was provided by considering the cross-references in the text:
It is said that there was once an English motorist in Ireland who stopped his car to ask the way to Kilkenny. "Sure and to goodness," replied the Irishman., "If I wanted to go to Kilkenny, I wouldn't be starting from here." |
13th May 1998 | Consultant: Tim Johns |
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